Indie Dream

I mean It's f**king great. I did not expect it to be this fun :)) Thanks for making this, you made my day* but it's over-decorated in terms of visuals and sound designs at times, due to the dev's bias maybe, and I fully understand that It's hard to make something feels simple yet complex at the same time. There's a problem with consistency, The game needs to look, sound, feel as a whole, It needs to feel like the same game, all the way throughout the game, from start to finish. The information needs to be consistent as well, you can't introduce too much new information, because then the game would deviate from the rest of the games that are out there. And that's not necessarily a good thing. Or if you introduce too much or too little information at different points of the game then that will be inconsistent. Unless, It really works of course. I get it that the building/ environment designs are cool and all, but that's just way too different trough out the game. Or at least, It's hard to make it work, It's hard to make it feels natural. The game needs to be different, yes, but the game needs to reach the consumer's expectation first. You have to make the game that already exists in people's head. For example, the Ios 7 for iPhones is designed to feel instantly familiar to the users that have never used the system before. And that seems to be working. What makes Undertale worked so well is because it's really clean, by that I mean, when you're playing it your eyes don't have to try too hard to find where the dev wants you to focus on. The object he wants you to look at / focus on is presented in a way that you can process instantly. He made things easier to focus on. So that It's easier on the eyes. Meaning more space for other information Also, the camera should not be shaking like that, It needs to be consistent throughout the game. If you do it right, you can tell the most boring story, in the most interesting ways, and that's f**king nice. I feel like all this stuff can be used in many ways. they're not fixed in any shape or form. At the end of the day...It's not like I know anything about making games, this is not me giving you advice. I just thought It would be cool to share my thoughts on Indie Dreams. plus you know what they say: the first draft is for the trash so it's ok♡hehe looking forward to your next game. cheers! p.s. Im thinking in a hardcore audio engineer's ways of thinking. It might not be helpful at all, Im aware of that.