Maid For My Master

If you want to get less lonely on a Christmas day and like robot waifu, then this visual novel is maid for you.

I don't play a lot of visual novels, so my feedback below could just be my preference. I have also seen Chobits, and the music reminded me of that. -Main character talks to himself too much at the beginning, too much inner monologue. (Boring) -Main character talks about events, but doesn't show them happening. However most or all the events are not very interesting. I came here for robot girls, not reading about the job or customers. -Story pace is too slow. (Boring) -Sentences sometimes don't feel fluid to read, and too many sentences. -There is little to no imagery that changes during dialogue, at least at the beginning (no expression changes, no sprite movement, no SFX, etc) It is just reading text and the same music. -The story doesn't show the robot girl until later. I came here for robot girls. -"She scowls" shouldn't be in the text, because the face expression is already on the sprite. If something happens in the visuals, you do not need to add text about it. -Had a hard time going through it due to slow pacing, not much happening, boring dialogue, cute robot girl no where in sight, -Art quality is good, UI art is good. -The main character's inner monologue describing other characters like Antoine, is unnecessary. This is another "show don't tell", where it would be so much better if Antoine was talking and showing his personality rather than the main character describing it. -Sentences should have basic fifth grader reading level, words like "ensuing" and "nix", in my opinion makes the dialogue less friendly to read. -Details are explained too much, it talks about the cold whether for maybe 2-3 paragraphs? And the dialogue kept going back to the cold weather. -Dialogue needs to be more interactive, with either more animations, dialogue choices, or gameplay. -Cafe fight lasts for like 4-5 parapgraphs lol. -No way to hide the textbox, textbox blocks some scenes especially the NSFW scenes. I had to press the skip button once I got to the cafe, the dialogue felt stuck on things that didn't really matter or contribute anything good to the story. Too much dialogue on everything. In my opinion, concise dialogue would be better. Long dialogue just adds fluff and bores people. I think introducing the robot girl at the very start, would have been better. If the VN is about robot girls, then the start in my opinion should show a robot girl. For example, you walk by stores and you see a couple robot girls for sale through the glass window, and one of them waves at you. Something like that. Straight to the point of what the VN is about. So, you can view my feedback as "the voice of someone outside of the VN community", which is very important "if" you want to attract players outside of the community. From reading the other comments for this game, it seems like people enjoy all the stuff that I don't enjoy lol. I have enjoyed at least 2 big time VN's, although they are NSFW, but their story was so good even without the NSFW stuff. So it isn't like I don't like VN's, it is just I have a specific taste in them. I haven't found a kinetic VN that I like yet, all the VNs that I like let you roam around the world, and have some hybrid mechanics to them, and their dialogue isn't super long.

I love it the art style and characters are great to i wish it was a bit longer but its still really good

[h1] 「♥Maid For My Master♥」 [/h1] [h2] 「♥游戏介绍♥」 [/h2] Maid For My Master-为主人而生的女仆是一款由 ebi-hime 开发并发行的一款单线程短篇视觉小说游戏，游戏的整体流程不长，没有额外的选项分支和结局。主要讲述了男主和机器人女仆Holly相遇到相识到相爱最后在床上进行激情的零件修理的故事，游戏流程大约在3个小时左右，可惜没有中文，需要玩家有一定的英文水平才能游玩，H场景一共有3处，CG质量很高，均为步兵呈现，推荐给喜欢视觉小说和对女仆题材感兴趣的玩家入手进行游玩。 [h2] 「♥游戏内容♥」 [/h2] 游戏讲述了一个在便利店打工的青年在一次下班的路上见到了一名发传单的少女，而男主在各种机缘巧合之下把这名白发少女的工作搞砸了，为了补偿Holly男主决定让她和自己住在一起（你怎么连吃带拿的呢？），无处可去的Holly因为是机器人女仆的原因，只能答应男主的请求了。后面就是两个人渐渐从朋友到恋人最后在床上过上了幸福日子的剧情了。 游戏整体的剧情大部分是发发糖，出点困难大伙一起克服困难，没有什么过于刀子的剧情和雷点，可以当一个平淡的小情侣日常来观看，整体质量还是比较高的，可以考虑入手。 [h2] 「♥涩涩内容♥」 [/h2] 游戏虽然本体不锁国区，但是商店下方有额外的DLC可以解锁关键内容，解锁后在游戏中可以看到三张额外的HCG，一张乳胶和两张本番的CG，总体的CG质量比较高，实用性虽然有点欠缺，但是故事讲的还可以。 [h2] 「♥总结♥」 [/h2] Maid For My Master-为主人而生的女仆是一款短流程的视觉小说游戏，游戏整体质量在线，剧情平淡无雷，机器人女仆的设定也能够满足玩家的喜好，推荐给喜欢视觉小说和对女仆题材感兴趣的玩家入手进行游玩。 [table][td]欢迎关注鉴赏家[url= https://store.steampowered.com/curator/45519015/]“无趣评测”[/url][/td][/table]

This pulls on all my emotions, in only the first few minutes! Working a register with the public, seeing Japanese culture in technology and vending machines, icy cold night air, warm food, talking to robots, both loving and hating long interactions with people... ebi-hime is a great writer!