It is yuri, it is anime style, it is cute, it has distinctive story. 10/10
And I am almost serious, it is better than most of damn 790 anime i've seen till this time point, but it obviously has some issues.
For each character there is one sprite, and CG's are h-scenes' exclusive, at least the quality is yummy and detailing is brilliant.
I think textual narrative is [b]too[/b] simple, it will be pleasing to read more in-depth, profound descriptions and overall more verbal language. It especially becomes a drawback during h-scenes, where fine aspects and intricate details are crucial. Even if it is visual it is still a novel. And I do not like regular frequent 3rd person view narration, especially when protagonist is present in scene, better to replace it with character's thoughts.
Choices can be tricky sometimes, which is great, but non-primary endings quite are quite nasty, don't be a bad girl.
I was thinking that there is too much politics (especially from this Texas cowgirl who can not just shut her mouth for a second, endless spill of dilettante politics opinions), there are no such big problems with equality and rights, and I am not even from [url=https://youtu.be/Y-3IV11_ZgA]US[/url]... and then I just occasionally remembered that they had removed abortion right from constitution this summer [spoiler]THEY REALLY DID CHANGE THE F#CKING [b][i]CONSTITUTION[/i][/b] TO REMOVE THIS, ARE THEY COMPLETELY F#CKED?!![/spoiler] (well, it is state dependent still, and I don't know what happened next), yet even the fact that they thought about it is overkill.
But everything is not bad at all, novel is quite enjoyable. I daresay that games from this author [spoiler][strike]authress[/strike], perhaps I am enjoying feminitives too much[/spoiler] have somewhat strange self-positioning. Typically you would expect that Yuri Consumption Machine™ (like me) will come here, agree with or support most of ideas, wholeheartedly enjoy story, probably will give some critique and happily will proceed to a next one. Maybe if this novel went deeper into discussion and analytics of society's prejudgments and ideas regards gender stuff and equality, it would make me reflect or ponder about this, but as it is, local good feminist ideas for me is something on surface, integral part of my being.
Regardless, big thankies to the creator of this visual novels. (✿◠‿◠)
[spoiler]А чё у Меган кулон с буквой Z? Патриотизм распирает что-ли... а, это для отвода глаз, должно быть.[/spoiler]
