Fatehaven

far too rushed, but ok

I was super excited to read this since I am in love with the author's other story, Samurai of Hyuga... So reading this was a huge disappointment. I couldn't even get passed the 1st chapter. The theme itself seems great, but the why it is write through me off. It is not as well done as SoH and the MC has NO personality at all. The MC doesn't even talk which takes away all story immersion. I don't know if this came before SoH but it was a huge disappointment and I'm just glad I didn't read this before SoH because if I had I wouldn't of read the other. This story really doesn't show how amazing of a writer the author really is.

what a game

The first choice decides if you're male or female. The second choice decides if you feel pain like getting 'kicked in the balls' or 'smacked in the breasts'. If you pick the latter, this is the next screen: "You are a woman. Why yes, I'll try to be modest here. But your sensitive teats are stinging in pain that shoots through your entire nervous system. You brace your arms over your chest instinctively. "Hurry up! We don't have time for this!" It just gets worse from there. This is what it says when asking you to choose if you have siblings: "While your mother did a fine job of getting you out of her nether regions, were you the only one?" I bought the game awhile ago and stopped playing almost immediately but i'd forgotten why. Now I remember. Other reviews claim the writing is good and maybe it is, later, but this is perhaps the worst intro I have ever read.

Just... go buy Samurai of Hyuga and the DLC. Maybe even support him on the usual sites. Not a good game, nor yet a good story, all told. Perhaps a test-run? Irrelevant, go play the Hyuga series, seriously.

This was a great game! I got it on my phone and got it here just in case I lost it on my phone. All I can say I wish there was a sequel.

What starts as a promising choose your own adventure story just executing strong fundamentals quickly devolves into a pointless and uninteresting shock twist with literally zero replay value.

Me gusto mucho, lo jugué finalmente porque es el del mismo creador de Samurai of Hyuga, y es un capo el hombre. Lo único lamentable del libro es que es muy corto, pero se nota que es de su estilo y habilidad. Muy recomendable.