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SECTION | SCORE
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Writing & Story | ★★☆☆☆
Representation | ★★★★☆
Gameplay | ★★☆☆☆
Art & Direction | ★★★☆☆
Recommendation | ★★★☆☆
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Writing & Story — ★★☆☆☆
I spent much of The Shu Legends feeling frustrated and that frustration came from a rather unusual place. The story itself is actually quite good. There were several moments where I found myself invested in the characters and curious about where their journey would lead. The emotional core is stronger than I initially expected, particularly once the relationship between the protagonists begins to develop. Rather than building itself entirely around romance, the game spends time establishing a larger narrative first, allowing feelings to emerge naturally from the story rather than existing solely for the sake of fanservice.
Unfortunately, the game repeatedly gets in the way of its own strengths. The English localisation makes the story significantly more difficult to engage with than it should be. Dialogue often reads awkwardly, emotional scenes lose much of their impact and many conversations exude the unmistakable rhythm of AI-assisted writing. I could frequently see the emotion the story was attempting to convey, yet I rarely felt it with the intensity that the scenes seemed to demand. What makes this particularly disappointing is that there is genuine potential here. The foundation is solid. The characters are compelling enough to drive the narrative, but I struggled to connect because the writing often lacks the nuance necessary to support them.
Representation — ★★★★☆
The MxM component develops slowly and benefits from that restraint. Rather than immediately pushing the characters toward romance, the story allows them to exist as individuals first. Their relationship grows through risky encouters and multiple life-threatening experiences, followed by misunderstandings and emotional conflict before romantic feelings begin to emerge. In this sense, the romance feels like a consequence of the story rather than the purpose of it.
There is also a degree of emotional complexity present that I appreciated. Feelings are not always recognised when they first appear and the characters occasionally hurt one another without fully understanding the consequences of their actions. That uncertainty helps the relationship feel more believable than many visual novels where attraction is immediate and conflict exists only to create temporary drama. I only wish the stronger emotional moments had been supported by stronger writing. The relationship itself has enough substance to carry the story, but the localisation frequently weakens scenes that should have left a greater impact.
Gameplay — ★★☆☆☆
Like most traditional visual novels, gameplay consists primarily of reading and progressing through the narrative. There is nothing inherently wrong with that. However, The Shu Legends does very little to distinguish itself from countless other visual novels within the genre. There are no choices, so there are no truly felt meaningful moments for the player and the overall structure remains extremely conventional. More importantly, the presentation often works against readability. Large walls of text frequently appear where several smaller text boxes would have been far more effective. At times, entire conversations are presented in dense blocks that feel visually exhausting to read. Visual novels ask players to spend hours engaging with text, which makes readability one of the most important aspects of the experience. Here, it often feels overlooked.
This is not a difficult problem to solve, but it is one that significantly affected my enjoyment.
Art & Direction — ★★★☆☆
The artwork is arguably the game's strongest asset. Character illustrations are attractive, the CGs are generally well executed and there is enough visual quality present to demonstrate the care that went into the project. Unfortunately, the presentation surrounding that artwork often feels surprisingly messy. More than once, a CG would change while I was still reading the accompanying text, forcing me to stop and locate my place again. At other times, the opposite occurred: the story would continue describing new actions, locations or emotional developments while I remained staring at an image from several minutes earlier.
This disconnect happens repeatedly throughout the game. Visuals and text do not need to align perfectly, but they should support one another. When they fall out of sync, immersion suffers. There are also occasional untranslated Chinese lines scattered throughout the English release. While these moments are relatively rare, they contribute to the broader feeling that the game would have benefited from additional editing and quality assurance before release. The artwork itself deserves praise, but the presentation surrounding it needs considerably more refinement.
Do I recommend it? — ★★★☆☆
This is a difficult recommendation. There is a genuinely compelling story hidden within The Shu Legends. The romance develops naturally, the emotional core is stronger than expected and the characters are capable of driving the narrative. At the same time, nearly every strength is weakened by presentation issues. The localisation lacks polish. The text layout is often cumbersome. The visual direction frequently feels disconnected from the story being told. Even the occasional untranslated text reminds the player that the game needed another round of refinement. But, for its current asking price, I do not regret playing it and I was happy to be able to support the developer. I would much rather see the developers revisit the localisation, improve the text presentation and refine the overall reading experience—even if that meant charging a higher price afterwards. Because the disappointing thing about The Shu Legends is not that it is bad; It is that there are frequent glimpses of a much better visual novel hiding beneath the version we currently have. I hope that the developer will take note of the feedback and implement it, because I can see many players avoiding this for the issues that I mentioned above.
