SCP Foundation: ITTLG - Chapter 1

Downvoted. Can't wait to see this as a tale! -1 Okay, joking aside, as an SCP author it wasn't... a bad product. It's ambitious for a first game and was a pretty good attempt. I streamed it in one of the largest SCP discords with a bunch of authors and we all had good laughs going through it. It suffers from some grammatical errors here and there (if you need or want someone to proofread or grammar... I'm available). I know you were trying to condense the story but the start was initially very exposition-heavy and skipped over a couple of details (like the translation collar, assuming it's from the D-Class uniform). There was also a problem with how abruptly it cut off - at first I actually thought I had misclicked or something! I would actually recommend just ending it when they go to sleep the night before, and having a "Continued in Chapter 2" card so people don't accidentally think they exited out of the game. The voice acting quality is... dismal, no offense, but reading over how it was a couple of friends makes sense. If you want, you could always get some professional or even more experienced VAs and keep your friend's voices in by changing sets of voices - but I've never actually worked with RenPy so I don't know how feasible that is. I'd also be down to help you guys do proofreading or anything writing related for free. It's nice to see more SCP fangames out there. Overall, it was a little short/bland and not much happened, but it was indeed a start for a chapter series worth of VNs and for two dollars really isn't much of a bank breaker to experience some ACTUAL SCP VN CONTENT (which is an untapped market, I'd think). It was good work for a first game, could use a little bit more polishing, but it wasn't bad and I'll play Chapter 2 whenever it comes out.

The story is interesting, the art is good, very well done! Especially for a first game! The only issue for me was the voice acting, but it's possible to mute it at least. Looking forward to next chapter release!

contains spoilers OK im only downvoting this for now until I see more in the future. so "Iris through the looking glass" is a guilty pleasure of mine. Even though it kind of reads like mediocre fanfiction, I always find myself reading it again and hoping for a sequel. so when I find out a game is being developed based on the light novel I was excited. and then I played the game. first off the pros. the art in this game is cool. sure there are some pictures ripped straight from the book and some straight up images ripped from google, but the original art stood out to me the most. its defiantly distracts you from the rips. hell they probably dident even need to do rips cause the character designs were already good. to be fair, this isnt some triple a company, this is a very small group of people. the game also adds some story elements that werent seen in the novel like the two chefs, but that added more in my opinon now with the cons: the pacing is all over the place. they straight up skip the part where the main character gets the collar but mentions that he was wearing it already despite not showing that scene. the light novel had some pacing issues but this cranks those issues up to 11. the story is also confusing. apparently the mc has been here before but for the most part it plays out the same events as the novel. the dialogue is more broken than the novel. in the novel some of the English is broken sure but it was on purpose, and had an explanation for why. this however has grammar mistakes and misspellings. finally the voice acting. the second i heard it i immediately turned off the voice acting. overall im not mad im just disappointed. that said i hope they don't stop development. I hope these guys can improve the first chapter with updates and i would like to see the story they are trying to tell. I did hear they were going to expand on the story. hopefully with some updates they can improve this game but for now if you want to read an anime scp story, just read the light novel.

As a Person who read the book originally and everyday hope for a volume 2 to happen one day, especially at reading it In class back then and occasionally re-read it sometimes as a adult now as I still got my copy On a shelf, I like this, and I see potential In this visual novel version of Iris Through The Looking Glass, Even If It suffers from few Issues like past reviews mentioned, I can see this becoming something more In future which makes me also hope for it to have more attention, and It makes me crave more after playing this

I really enjoyed the storyline. The art is great and the expressions of the characters are on point. Also props to the voice actors, considering this is probably their first time, as well for the game. As for the creator, I'd say this is a great start of your journey in creating games. Even though it isn't of "standard" quality, the game was still worth it. Looking forward to playing the next chapter.

J'encourage ce type de projet en solitaire. C'est une merveilleuse experience à condition d'aller au bout du projet d'origine. J'apprécie cette VN et son thème. Je pense aussi qu'il ne faut pas baisser les bras coùte que coùte, cher dev. ;) Courage et Foi! "La liberté, ce n'est pas de faire ce que l'on veut, mais de vouloir ce que l'on fait" - Bossuet. Bravo, et à bientot pour les suites! ;)

pretty good game, always been a fan of the SCP universe and this is a pretty unique spin on it

Honestly it's kinda scam