Mancer: Prelude

The game doesn't try to advertise something it isn't, which is always a plus. They aren't subtle about Alexis being a touch-starved pervert, but the writers don't fall into the trap of causing her to lose all other character traits the moment she sees a pair of tits. The writing is surprisingly good for a VN, especially one that advertises comedic value. The Mature Content warning does apply, even if it seems like an exaggeration. Way to go, Lex. There are, however, a few things that could use improvement(or just playtesting) -First, at least some of the dialogue choices are implied to have consequences, even if only statistical ones. Unfortunately, what-if anything- these consequences are isn't explained well if at all. This exacerbates some other problems I'll mention later. -Second, there are some minor textual issues: empty save files are in a different language(Russian I think?), and if intentional that information isn't conveyed well; there are also some repeated or jittery dialogue(some words appear to have been accidentally deleted), and one of those repeated dialogue lines actually softlocked me unless I had Auto text on(when the elf ♥♥♥♥♥ pulls a knife on you). -Third, the Character Creation options have you pick a Personality Trait(which is only referenced by name once), a specialty(which is referenced twice), and later a Magic(Which I think isn't referenced at all). It's unclear what purpose they serve since for most of the game, there is no apparent benefit or penalty for diverging from your starting choices. There is one choice during the big fight where you are required to follow your starting choices or just focus on Nazar, but beyond that it only seems to interact with the level function. -Fourth, there is a level function which is not even mentioned until you level up. It is unclear what purpose that serves(I think you learn the Magic at level 2?), since it is only brought up when you gain EXP. Overall, i recommend

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Esta muy bien. Una critica seria que me gustaria ver más dibujos hechos por el artista

Не плохо для начала.