Magic Exposure – Yuri Visual Novel

[b]short review:[/h1][/b] 5.5/10. feels very rushed but has cute story, writer brain sad :( [b]long in-depth review:[/h1][/b] 5.5/10. i got gifted this game for my birthday since i had it on my wishlist for a while. this game is very cute, it has a pretty interesting premise and i liked the beginning parts. however, as i got more and more into it, i slowly started to get more frustrated at how the writers speeded through the story, like they needed to catch a train within the game's runtime. im a writer myself, and i think they could've done a bit of a better job highlighting some scenes. i get that it's sold as a "short game", but personally i wouldn't have minded if some moments were fleshed out more. as another review has pointed out, it feels like English isn't the writer's first language, but you could've at least hired someone who does know how to write out a fully-fledged story. because i don't like to give out bold, baseless claims and since i don't like belittling other people's work of art without constructive criticism, i am going to share some of the specific moments that i shared with some of my friends i discussed this game with: [list] [*]right so im playing this yuri visual novel and im very upset, because it feels like it's written by a bunch of men, it's moving so incredibly fast my writer brain is absolutely disgusted by the fact they're skipping over so many questions, feelings, things to explore like, what i would've done with the sentence ("While we were absentmindedly talking while playing games the night before, Erika and I decided to go to the mall for a date.") for example, is " We talked about how many games of Kart Race we played last night, how I could've maybe kept track of the time a little better and that I could've given up after she's proven her point of being better. Sure, it was fun, but maybe a little too long. Then, we slowly got on to a new topic; that we could get to know each other a little more. Erika proposed the idea of, and these are her words, going on a 'date' in the mall. I jumped up in my seat from excitement and accepted with grace, feeling genuinely happy for the first time in a long while. " [*]like this! then describe HOW Erika taught her! you can write at LEAST a 5 minute scene about how she trained Bianca to stand up for herself, by imitating a random person on the street or something like that! it feels too rushed :( (the sentence was "Erika taught me tricks on how to defend myself, and while I'm grateful for her, I don't think I'll ever use it soon.") also, as im writing this review, i now notice too that some sentences feel very cheesy and are VERY obvious set-ups for foreshadowing. [/list] i haven't gotten around to finishing it yet, im honestly thinking of refunding it and spending the three euros on something else. i appreciate the effort for hot furry girl yuri, but for my taste, this isn't it.

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MADiSON if it was good

简陋且简单的福瑞百合。入了不算亏，不过也没必要。虽然是机翻不过可能原文文本简单所以还可以看懂。无法保存好在流程很短，在0.5h左右。没什么剧情，就平淡的小甜品吧。

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天哪，太甜了

I already had this game on my Nintendo Switch and i really loved it the first time i've readed this good Visual Novel. I would love to have more content in this story, maybe characters sprites change when they should have different clothes, maybe add more languages like french, the story is a little short but had a great time read it. I love it, you should read it on.

eeeeeeeeeeeee ta bien