The Great Tournament

The Great Tournament One : good story that seemed a little slow to me at first and that surprised me with dramaturgy in the middle. The characters, despite being very simply depicted in just a few words, gives a sense of depth in their interactions and dialogue and I loved them. The romantic interests have balanced amount of lines of dialogue and neither one is made more charismatic than another, even the princess. Their scenes felt very personal and touching. The flaw maybe that it sort of comes out of the blue and the character was'nt really so important until then. The amount of time required to develop romantic interest seems also very short, not logical and a bit forced or maybe it's intentional and the narration let you imagine and suppose that it actually spans longer than that. Even though, it's well written and done. You can see the author cared. The mechanics are awkward and the RNG infuriating. There are many typing mistakes or awkard sentences but that does'nt impede much the storytelling. One thing though : the ending lacks a little depth in description. It's like "and they were hapily married and had a lot of children". I don't have much to say, it"s kind of a unique CYOA that blends in a diversity of scenes and though it has definitely flaws it also has specifics aspects that weigh the balance on the best side of CYOA.

Great Story and Dialog Options

It's a good start to the sequel.The first time to play such a tight word game. It would be better if you could get more open and longer stories in the future.

Not as much of an interactive book as you'd expect from a text-only choices-only game, but an actual fun game somehow Probably not worth that price, but they don't write their own stories so i'd think there's a lot of cuts to split

A gripping tale full of adventure and exciting events. Very nice story.

Yes very nice, lots of reading, wish I knew more english!

A really good game. The mechanics for fighting are wonky in my opinion, but nothing to terrible. Overall I would recommend it

A short, but wonderful little game. Sir Robert = THE GOAT