LVN Fake News

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why the ♥♥♥♥ was i given this

Lo pillé en un pack con el título anterior de este mismo desarrollador por 2 duros y la verdad, no merece la pena, es una novela yuri con 4 CGs (indicado por lo propios logros y con el parche), historia genérica y muchos detalles muy forzados (como por ejemplo lo que ocurre con la protagonista).

absolute ♥♥♥♥. writing is terrible, characters are awful, and no real romance. its a really short and underwhelming viusal novel. also BDSM is ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ gross. thats not a good kink or desire. its ♥♥♥♥.

For a "visual" novel, LVN Fake News does little to provide a visual experience... The biggest problem this visual novel has is the writing. I can look past the asset flipping/stock images that this visual novel crutches on, but the story is virtually handed to you. What I mean by this is that every character points out the obvious - what's currently happening in the story and what is about to happen soon, both of which the audience could've otherwise picked up on their own. The way characters speak in the story isn't natural, and it feels like I'm reading an article instead of human dialogue. Each line is very wordy, almost enough to make a paragraph. There are ways to make these paragraphs split into smaller chunks that are visually interesting: for example, when the story opens with Nadiya talking about her dream as a video game designer, that could be replaced with flashbacks of Nadiya playing video games. Other unnecessary pieces like when the university was built could be completely thrown away since it has no relevance to the story. It could at least be put somewhere in the background; write an establishment date somewhere around the campus like "since 1964." I hope the creator doesn't take this review too harshly. I would love to see him improve and make better, more entertaining visual novels in the future.

the hell...

this novel could used a lot more work. it really doesn't have much going for it.