Luna's Twilight

The English translation is AWFUL, a lot of the sentences are just a word salad of nonsense.

In [i]Luna’s Twilight[/i] your grandmother has passed and left you a secluded mansion in the middle of a mysterious forest. Inhabited by four unique and charming potential romances. Thank you Grandma :) [h2][u]The Story & Spice Level[/u][/h2] I have to say the start of the story is a bit humorous to me. You come from a well-to-do family with maids, butlers and all the luxuries. Your grandma has passed on and left you the key to her luxurious mansion in the middle of the forest. A forest with many rumors of witches and mythical beings. A place shrouded in mystery where few are reluctant to go. But one letter from your dear old deceased granny and your parents are more than happy to let you go. No objections and no hesitation. [i]I am not sure if your parents were aware they are sending you ALONE to a luxurious mansion in the forest with four handsome suitors?[/i] So you end up being the new caretaker of the mansion and allow your four esteemed guests to remain. The novel starts off with a prologue. You start off getting to know all the characters and setting up the story. From there the story branches off with each of the four potential romances having their own routes and storyline. ❗[i]Once the prologue is complete the game makes you choose one of the four routes to pursue. From that point on you're committed to that character's story.[/i] Two endings are complete at this time in early access (Tyrineon and Raul’s). Each character has 3 endings, good, bad and true. The four strangers you meet at the mansion are; a vampire and noble named Shade, a small enduring boy named Al (who just appears as a boy at first glance), a closed off yet loyal and straightforward werewolf named Raul and an elf named Tyrineon who despite always smiling it never reaches his eyes. 🌶️ The spice level in this novel is very mild. The characters kiss but there are no graphic scenes, nudity or anything lewd. [h2][u]Settings, Features & Gameplay[/u][/h2] Settings & features include; Screen mode, resolution, language, text options, and audio controls including the ability to adjust voice volume for each character or mute them. Text is easy to read and the text box can be hidden for screen captures by clicking your right mouse button and clicking it again to bring it back. There is a gallery that unlocks as you play for each character including the main character that houses not just the cg arts but also cut-scene animations and cute chibi moments. The story for each character is divided up into chapters and the game will prompt you to save before the next chapter begins. Each chapter is pretty short so I stuck to just saving at the prompts. [h2][u]The visuals are beautiful…[/u][/h2] The artwork is gorgeous, and the games biggest strength. Vibrant palette, attention to details and lighting and done in a beautiful anime style. The main characters are animated to a high degree. Beautifully done with different poses, hair that sways, eyes that blink, and movements that mimic breathing. A lot of love went into the artwork and presentation of this novel. https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=3426234636 https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=3426234799 [h2][u]The writing…is a struggle[/u][/h2] The writing is [i]not[/i] fluid in this novel, this is something lost in translation. Some conversations will seem odd or it will take a moment to figure out what they are trying to say. It happens enough that it is very noticeable. The grammar and sentence structure is often incorrect with some words just not being used properly to describe actions or feelings. The artwork and the presentation of the novel is really well done but being a visual novel where reading, for most of us, is a critical component (since we rely on the subtitles), it would be remiss of me to not point out the state of the writing. [h2][u]Overall Experience[/u][/h2] The artwork and animations are the strength of this novel, the writing is it’s weakness. The story itself is interesting in parts and I really do enjoy all the different characters. I did manage to complete both Tyrineon and Raul’s endings to completion however not all achievements are available at this time as it requires you to finish and view all of the endings for all characters and two are not available yet. I highly suggest anyone who is interested in this novel to try the demo and pay attention to the writing. I never played the demo so I cannot say how much exposure you will have to the novel overall. I feel a lot of effort went into making this novel so I do recommend it (on a steep sale). I do not think the core writing will change from now to full release. Hopefully my experience will be helpful in what to expect if you are interested. 🌹 [i]This game was purchased by me for my personal library. 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Долго ждала игру и буквально пришло уведомление о выходе почти сразу купила. Но прошу не совершать моих же ошибок игра визуально прикольная, но перевод вырви глаза и съешь. Это не возможно читать на данный момент по крайне мере на русском языке. Жду дальнейших обновлений Игра майнит крипту

Awesome artwork, slick animations, but most of all—[b]Beautiful Raul's muscles[/b]

that blonde guy isn't even just short he's literally a kid? i can put up with a bad translation, but not with creepy romances that are portrayed as fluffy. also i keep getting achievements in the wrong places? it's like they're swapped cause i got the 'all shade cgs' achievement... before even meeting him. EDIT: the skip button doesn't work.yay.

풀보이스라 좋습니다. 일단 공통루트가 적어서 동일한 텍스트를 여러번 읽어야하는 번거로움이 없어서 좋고, 퀄리티를 높이기 위해 노력한 흔적이 잘 보입니다. 제작자분이 블로그 댓글에 답댓 남겨주셔서 출시한거 알았고 구매했는데 굉장히 만족스럽습니다. 남은 공략 루트도 얼른 해금됐으면 합니다! 일단 여성향 게임 출시 기다리다가 엎어진 건이 너무 많아서 국내 여성향 게임이 무사히 출시했다는 것 만으로도 행복할 따름입니다 ㅠ bgm도 좋고 여주 성격도 씩씩하고, 여주 이름 설정할 수 있는 것도 마음에 듭니다!

이게 순애고 사랑이다... 티르야 내가 살기 좋은 세상 만들어줄게

ich würde ja gerne einen Daumen nach oben geben aber die deutsche Übersetzung ist eine absolute Katastrophe die Sätze ergeben überhaupt keinen Sinn wie soll man bei dem ganzen Kauderwelsch verstehen um was es da in der Story geht? (ja gut durch die vielen Übersetzungsfehler kommen lustige Sätze raus aber das ist ja nicht der Sinn und Zweck warum man ein Visual Novel kauft und spielt deshalb von mir einen Daumen nach unten schade soweit wie ich es mitbekommen habe ergeben die Sätze in englischer Sprache auch nicht viel mehr Sinn als im deutschen)

I really wanted to like this game. The art is very pretty and it feels like a lot of love went into it. But the translation is AWFUL. Truly painful. There were sections that I had absolutely no idea what was being said, it was just gibberish. The game is definitely not worth $20 in it's current state.

라울 루트 타고 엔딩까지 8시간 걸렸습니다. 저는 이 게임을 하며 수없이 F와 T를 오갔고 이를 갈았습니다. 내일 치과 가겠습니다;;; 쉽지 않았지만... 어쩌겠습니까... 그를... 선택해버렸는데... 우직하고 든든하고 그냥 늑대 그잡체인 라울 최고입니다. 성우님 목소리도 쩔고 중간에 나오는 뽀너스 애니메이션들도 너무너무 귀엽습니다. 만족스럽게 플레이했고 차차 다른 캐릭터와 선택지도 나눠서 플레이해볼 생각입니다!! 좋은 게임 만들어주셔서 감사합니다 S2 성우님들 목소리 넘 좋고... 최고입니다!!!!!!!! 감사합니다!!! 다들 건강하시고 돈길만 걸으세요 S2