Fallstreak

免费 没中文 没成就 陨焰 索科特林大陆 —— 一片被扭曲现实的迷雾环绕的隐秘秘境。 《陨焰》讲述了少女艾德利丝・科塔尔的故事，她一旦入睡，便会踏入一场永恒的金色梦境。 她的梦境，与十年前那场名为 “坍缩之火” 的神秘灾难究竟有何关联？那场灾难中，七彩烈焰从天而降，倾泻而下。而这一切，又与她最终的目标 —— 逃离封闭的索科特林世界，有着怎样的联系？ 《陨焰》是一款线性视觉小说，将传统叙事手法与现代黑暗奇幻、心理惊悚元素相结合，打造出独一无二的故事体验。 特色内容 文本：8 万字完整剧本 角色立绘：13 个独特角色立绘 场景背景：30 + 张原创背景 剧情插画：12 张事件 CG 原创原声：23 首配乐

A great deep story which made me thought much about life and stuff. Great art and music! Wish you all the best!

This is a divisive one. It definitely has flaws, but I found them worth overlooking, while others might (and, oftentimes, did) not. Let me start with this game's one unequivocal strong point in my eyes: The art. It's clearly had a lot of work put into it, and it shows. All the character designs are well-done, the expressions convey emotions wonderfully, and it's overall just very nice to look at. For a free product, it's amazing, but it's very good even outside of that metric. Now, one of the most commonly cited weaknesses of the novel is its diction. The prose is often considered to be a bit too purple, and Adelise in particular to be unrealistically articulate. Personally, I was engrossed enough in the story that the writing flowed well for me, and I believe that Adelise's speech patterns are a deliberate literary device used to show [spoiler]her much greater subjective age due to time spent in the golden dream[/spoiler]. Still, it can be a bit much to chew on, and there are some rather annoying grammatical errors sprinkled throughout the script, chiefly missing commas. As for the darker elements of the game: without spoiling too much, I believed them to be overall solid at their core, and with definite emotional weight, but I think that some scenes and events were a little gratuitous, or simply described in more detail than we really needed. I think that giving a few especially skin-crawling details without going into everything in between would produce a much more effective horror punch, and I'm pleased to see the somewhat terser and more minimalistic prose of the sequel go in that direction. Finally, my biggest criticism by far is that the novel ends far too abruptly. It has a solid cliffhanger, but there is no sense that the novel is coming to an end before that comes, so one gets the sense that it simply stops halfway through. In fact, I actually checked several times to see if my game was somehow broken when I came to it, believing that it wasn't the actual end. This probably won't be an issue for those reading whenever a direct continuation of the story is released, but for the time being it's quite jarring. Still, given that this game doesn't ask for your money, I would say that it is probably worth your time. If nothing else, I recommend reading it as a companion piece to its sequel, which is a deeply excellent visual novella in its own right, improves greatly on every flaw of this one, and very much earns its price tag in my opinion.