Fallstreak

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The story is making my heart goes like roller coaster in an instant. The beautiful background and character's point of view is good too. This is one of my fav VN. Thank u for making this game <3

里面的梦境的环境营造了一种很好的意境，无尽的草地中，一栋白色房屋，陷入永恒。配合着虽然温暖给人以安全感，却隐含着忧伤的背景音乐，有着代入其中的金色永恒梦境的意境美。这些里面的文案和故事都耐人寻味，画风较好。但无语音，更无中文，则是该作的短处所在。然而另一方面，纯英文阅读使得只能了解大概的作用，也给人以想象空间，这与每个人不同的经历产生交接，有着各具特色的金色永恒梦境。

There are several problems with this title. Main one: it's not a complete story, not even in arc sense - Fallstreak doesn't ends as something finished. It just ends, abruptly. Moreover story lacks its main vector of development: where it goes? why? who are main characters? All of it is messed. You may see this vn as a group of short character's stories merged together. Just obscure still drawing of unfinished piece. Secondary problems: 1. abrupt transitions between scenes - it messes tempo and emotions of readers, breaks immersion. It is like you are bathing uder the sun, blink, and you are under the flood rain. Lack of narrator's speech only makes it harder to follow the jumps. 2. references - as it can be seen that author has read quite a lot of titles himself by looking at different moments of story, but you don't need to show your knowledge in story that in no way is related to our world. Imagine: you read a sad dialogue scene, and one of characters drops: "Yet those hands will never hold anything" If you want to make free vn - it's okay, make it. But story should be complete. Even if you are going to make part 2,3,4.. First part must have logical ending. Because otherwise you betray your readers who invested their time in your story. Especially when you was able to make good short stories inside vn, but failed to bring picture as a whole.

Игра "Fallstreak" — захватывающий платформер с уникальной физикой падения. Динамичный геймплей, где игроки управляют персонажем, прыгающим через препятствия, требует точности и стратегии. Графика яркая, уровни разнообразные, а музыка добавляет напряжения. Однако сложность может отпугнуть новичков. Рекомендую для любителей адреналина и головоломок.

Отличная, но короткая визуальная новелла. Некоторые моменты повествования слегка скомканы, но поданы отлично. Интересная, а главное лучшая за свою цену новелла. Ждём вторую часть.