Dead Detention (Rescribbled)

富有表现力和游戏性的小品。说的是高中校园内爆发丧尸危机，几个高中生一同逃生的故事。 demo出来的时候印象就很深刻了。有很多小游戏，并且很好地融入了剧情，也不重复。小游戏都是限时的，互动感强，给逃生增添了更多紧张感。整体设计很像一本手工制的立体书，能看出一部分小游戏和立体书的机关很相似。 游戏难度可以调整，有多结局。一周目1~1.5h左右。剧情较弱，但表现新颖。立绘和对话很有幽默感，音乐也配合得好。 总得来说玩得很开心，推荐。 （个人感觉是高中英语难度

This is fun, I enjoy this.

Peak as ♥♥♥♥!!! I have only gotten one ending and this game is peak. The art style is better then the og, the story is better, hell EVERYTHING IS BETTER! the ONLY flaw is that some of the mini games are a little BS but other then that. 9.5/10, hell maybe even 10/10. worth the $4 :3

10/10 peak remake I proudly requested on newgrounds 🙏🙏🙏

Thanks for remaking this game, it was so much fun to play again after all this time!!

I really like the game's main menu. It's so clean, and it doesn't follow the pattern that most games do, which i really like to see. And the sound effect of clicking a button there is so good, dude. And i think that the soundtrack was also quite good. It supported the game's moments and was more to my tastes than most. But maybe some weird or goofy stuff in it would work well with the game. I think that dead detention's biggest problem is just its writing, being a bit amateur. Some of the dialog felt a little forced or didn't really seem believable, like that scene early on when [spoiler]max is like "I just want everything to go back to normal..."[/spoiler] felt a bit abrupt to me 'cause the game had just started. And naomi's reaction, of, like, "We're a team now" also felt a bit too fast, felt like they were too close this early on. I think that naomi is a character who'd become close to someone real fast, but i didn't quite believe it. I think that a few too many scenes end with zombies turning up and max, naomi, and sora then running away or killing them. And i think that max, naomi, and sora kill zombies way too effectively for them to be so terrified whenever zombies turn up. I think that the minigames were honestly pretty good. Some of them were pretty cool and i feel like they were all balanced nicely. It's honestly kinda impressive how well they explain themselves just visually. But at the same time i think that they should've been more consequential, 'cause they felt like a pretty big part of the game to me, but ultimately didn't seem all that important. I mean, they *were* important, helping the pacing, adding some tension to certain scenes, making some cool moments, but i think that they should've felt weightier. Maybe they just need a little power over the story, changing max's inclination slightly or some branching dialog or something, more than what they have now. And maybe a help button directly explaining whichever minigame you're on could be useful, 'cause i got stuck on one for a minute, but that'd prob'ly be largely unnecessary. Dead detention honestly feels like a kinda dumb game; i was mostly expecting a few chuckles when i started playing it. And i did have a few chuckles, and dead detention is kinda a dumb game, but... i honestly got way more invested in its story and characters than i thought that i would. Like, at the end of the game(in the good ending), when max [spoiler]runs back to find naomi and fights the boss zombie, and you run through each of the important minigames, like, that moment honestly felt kinda powerful to me.[/spoiler] Even with its amateurish writing, dead detention made me care about it in a way that a lotta games fail to do. It's honestly worth checking-out.

An improved version of a Newgrounds classic