A Clockwork Ley-Line: The Borderline of Dusk

I like the plot twist in the end haha Makes me wanna play the sequel more. Also Tsubaki is cute

[h2] 剧本质量过硬但氛围和情绪铺垫不好的反例 [/h2] 之前以为后两作无望去dlsite买了，直接发个总评吧 由于本系列每作都有叙述性诡计，我尽量避开了关键剧透 围绕各种遗品引发问题解决事件的设定本身是有趣的（在游戏发售年时点），日常写的太水了，并且解决事件的过程和次要女主渡过时有种已经进个人线的感觉，真进线后反而草草敷衍了事。第一部主线和女主的感情线完全没有进展，一个为了姐姐的误会，揭开了男主的身世，之后说明了女主来学园的理由和学园的一些基本设定。最后进女主线虽然有些强行，我还挺喜欢看这种两人半推半就的错误。 第二部总体还是延续前作的结构，前期解决遗品引发的事件，之后一口气揭开了夜之学生的真相，妹妹出现，找到睦月失去小太郎。本身几个伏笔回收挺震撼的，感情线上和女主半推半就的剧情居然是共通线，在这个基础上回头看攻略次要女主时真的很微妙，男主你怎么好意思说继续保留感情的？ 第三部全程高能把二十年前的事情理了一遍。就是演出形式太敷衍了只有文字。忧绪秀演技，主角再次定义了其他的身份。这机械降神也太好用了吧，情绪铺垫还是那么差，指某个有感情的人工生命，和安蒂尔安排些感人桥段啊。兄妹之间感情处理也不是很好，恋爱线倒是没有在安排支线女主扫兴了，在事件快结束时也收回了保留，而其他角色的if线全在番外小剧场。 总体来说时钟机关系列剧本质量过硬但是氛围和情绪铺垫不好的反例，不太会讲故事，故事本身再好观感体验也难以保证。 综合评价：63（黄昏）/75（残影）/84（朝雾）

Starts out a bit slow, but really holds it's own once you get on the "true route." The art and music are pretty damn outstanding, and I feel that the writing is solid (not perfect, but good.) One nice bonus, the voice audio is aimed toward the side of the screen the character is on. just a nice little touch. Actually digs into a few magic situations, and explains the school's inner workings... kinda. The audio commentary for the BGM is really neat. MC is not the typical clueless jackass, and his bickering with classmates is entertaining. Downsides: the side routes are really short. I did enjoy Tsubaki's route. the game is buggy - time doesn't track properly in Steam without using "leyline-localizer" - it's in a pinned comment somewhere. Also, if you are skipping ahead a lot, save FREQUENTLY because the game likes to crash. No cloud saves or achievements. Mooko's route ended up a bit ... non consentually. I didn't care for that, I feel that she deserved a more delicate outcome. R18 content is available from .... Denpasoft, I believe. It's free. Heavily pixilated. Overall, I enjoyed this installment and will play the followups. The principal has the most annoying laugh ever.

Disappointing how the game doesnt work on steam deck.

汉化补丁不能直接覆盖到根目录，多半是版本对不上吧，入正玩盗真难受。 ———————————————————————————————————— 第一作没什么惊艳人的地方，好在日常的功底不错，整体剧情可以说有点平淡，挖了一堆坑，望后作能补充完善。 有一说一，傲娇什么的果然还是太棒了，但关键还在于女主的聪慧吧，不然在23年这个傲娇退环境的年代，很难想象我能坚持推下去。至于其他两位可攻略角色，嘛充电话费送的就不在意了。

Highly recommended, in my personal opinion this game has an interesting story and great CG, but one thing to note is that the route other than the true ending is too short... The common route given is quite interesting to follow, you should play all three series to find out the story deeper

三部系列作的第一部。整体内容篇幅不大，但是很好地展开了故事。 真正想全身心体验这个故事的话，不要看任何评论，只看官网的介绍就行了。 唯一要强调的一点，三部最好全通，看价格也请把三部的总价当成这游戏的价格就行。

- So fun to play, rating 95/100

不错的作品，第一部挖的大部分坑都填了，留了一个需要玩后续两部才能填上的坑

Edit: Finally this title was reviewed and now I can finally play it, and recommend it! Thank you Sekai Project for doing something about it, it's great that you listened, especially the font part that really needed to be revised! Those tiny, thin letters where just bugging my eyes, and now I can finally enjoy this game. And it's really great! The story is not something amazing, but the writing is very funny, especially because you can hear the LIs thoughts (which was hilarious). I haven't finished this one, but now I'm curious about the next one...