The Pauser

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Here I will leave this beautifull capybara, whoever pass by can pet it. (Give me thumbs up, and you will grow 3cm. Reward this and you will grow 30cm) ⠀⢀⣀⠤⠿⢤⢖⡆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⡔⢩⠂⠀⠒⠗⠈⠀⠉⠢⠄⣀⠠⠤⠄⠒⢖⡒⢒⠂⠤⢄⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠇⠤⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠀⠀⠈⠀⠈⠈⡨⢀⠡⡪⠢⡀⠀ ⠈⠒⠀⠤⠤⣄⡆⡂⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠢⠀⢕⠱⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⢳⣐⡐⠐⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠀⠁⠇ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠑⢤⢁⠀⠆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⢰⠀⠀⠀⡀⢄⡜⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠘⡦⠄⡷⠢⠤⠤⠤⠤⢬⢈⡇⢠⣈⣰⠎⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣃⢸⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⢪⢀⣺⡅⢈⠆⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠶⡿⠤⠚⠁⠀⠀⠀⢀⣠⡤⢺⣥⠟⢡⠃⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠉⠉⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀

Review in progress here. I know game dev is tough as ♥♥♥♥, but the game's far from finished. As such, I will reserve judgement until the game is in a semi-finished state. First off, some suggested features: - Skip dialogue - Speed up dialogue - Dialogue box blocks your view of the characters when present. Maybe make it smaller or put it at the top of the screen? Other than that, the game plays fine. Maybe add the ability to rebind actions? By far, however, the biggest problem with this game is bugs. As I said, it's still inconclusive, so imma need this fixed before I give the game a final score. Some particulars: - Dialogue triggers with multiple NPCs will repeat if you walk back to the trigger area. This can be annoying if you accidentally backtrack and get stuck in an unskippable conversation. - In your first encounter with the demons, they disappear awkwardly when you get the prompt to pause the game. Just a little visual bug but still makes the game look unpolished. Maybe have them fade out? - Grammatical errors. In a story-based adventure platformer, grammatical errors are the last thing you want. I spotted quite a few within the first ten minutes of playing. I'd go back over all the lines to make sure they're absolutely perfect. Grammarly should help. Again, I will reserve judgement. I think indie devs deserve nothing but praise and honest, good-faith critique for their work. That being said, the game's not finished enough to give a final score.