See You Later

A very short yuri kinetic novel about death and loss and love. See You Later is a competently put together work with fun moments and heartwrenching moments. So why do I not recommend it? [b]The English translation is tragic.[/b] From the get-go, it comes across as stilted and unnatural. Sentences are confusing and unclear, gendered words are commonly wrong (grandpa instead of grandma, he instead of she), and the all-time classic of bad translations of Asian languages: nonsensical tense usage. The spelling of names changes occasionally, sometimes the wrong names are used, and even the speaker name boxes sometimes seem to disappear and appear in the textbox instead. To make matters worse, some lines are left untranslated. There is an entire video cutscene with Chinese text in it whose contents remain a mystery to the English player. There is also a section of about twenty lines where, instead of replacing the Chinese text, a new textbox has been added after each line that contains the English text. Suffice it to say, the English prose resists comprehension and enjoyment. Some brief moments are pulled off extremely well, and then the next line you will have lost the thread. It is not very pleasant. To illustrate the issue, I would like to comment on how I experienced the "[b]feature[/b]"s listed in the store description. [i]A slightly bitter confession:[/i] There was a confession scene. It was mostly confusing, but perhaps the music and the visuals could convey bitterness to someone. [i]Warm and mellow memories:[/i] The story is told in snippets, bouncing between past and present. Some of the past segments are indeed warm and mellow when you can follow what is going on. [i]Evocative dreams:[/i] No dreams are depicted in the game. However, in-text there exists To The Moon-esque dreaming technology that is relevant to the story. I cannot give you more detail than that, because the English regarding the topic is particularly nonsensical. [i]And a final, well-spoken goodbye:[/i] There is a goodbye. It did not come across as well-spoken at all. All in all, the state of the localization is dire. The game is, however, very cheap. If you can stomach bad translations and do not mind being left out of the loop sometimes, there are some very touching parts in the game that you may want to purchase it for. Even a nugget of actual wisdom at the very end: when our protagonist Gui Yan [spoiler]is in Yu Huanyin's funeral and she asks an old woman 'is this normal?' regarding her feelings, the woman replies: [i]For a grieving person, everything is normal.[/i] And that is how it do be. You will process or not process grief in your own way.[/spoiler]

逆天游戏，不多说了，从头到尾叙事稀烂，不知道到底想表达什么，如果你只是普普通通地写个悲剧也就算了，从头到尾点题的梦境到底起到了一个什么作用，女主怎么莫名其妙就释怀了，连死去的女主的梦境里到底有什么都没说，结尾还用fly me to the moon，疑似想学eva那套意识流结果整了依托故弄玄乎的东西，全流程一小时指望讲明白啥啊，还有立绘真的挺丑的，没事就提到小黄片，别把女的整的好像精虫上脑一样行不。

虽然挺便宜，但是我给（1.5/10） 角色画得太恶俗 插科打诨写得很弱智，女同说彩礼顺直笑话可还行 配音一分都不想给，虽然都是老熟人，但是棒读太严重了也 老奶奶张口就是文言文是咋想的 多次反复点题“梦”和“月亮”，可是点题方式浅薄，好似笔者初中写记叙文。 你游是不是利群软广 很多cg引人发笑 不知道是不是篇幅太短的缘故，主角和欢音在后者死之前的相处铺垫还是太少，会令读者觉得主角对女友的一番深情莫名其妙 而且故事本身篇幅短，结果一下子有主角 女友 老钱和儿子四个角色，角色能否充分塑造可想而知 游戏里背景部分插入实拍gif，不明白作者想做什么 余欢音张口闭口小黄片，我早就说过男的别碰百合 剧情太无聊了，基本上是些和死人相关作品的老套路了 结局太故弄玄虚了 玩完真的好奇别人是怎么给的好评 最后对warmmu想说：很多琉璃花糖的作品都是你执笔的，你到底能不能好好打磨作品，别一个个的做这么短，感觉是上厕所时间紧急赶出来的一样，近几年你们作品越出越快，质量却从不见长进，没吸取少女侦探大暴死的教训，居然四个月后就要上架新游戏

I once got this as part of a bundle and kind of forgot about it until now, but I enjoyed the story a lot! It's very short (around 1h), but I think it actually works like this without feeling too rushed. The plot is rather simple but quite emotional and even thought-provoking. I really liked the characters and the writing (despite the awkward translation), therefore I'd love it if there was more content providing further insight on the characters and events. I particularly like how the lovely art and music manage to create a very melancholic yet strangely beautiful/dream-like atmosphere, which fits the story very well! Overall I found this to be a sweet short experience worth a shot, altough preferably with a discount due to the short length.

This is one of those games/movies/stories that after you finished it you just want to sit down and think for a while. See You Later is a touching visual novel about love and death. This visual novel will take you on a short but with slow pacing journey as Yanzi spending her last moments with her girlfriend HuanYin, who is unfortunately happened to have a terminal illness. The characters' arts and voice acting are nicely done. And the overall style of this visual novel is very artistic, with good combinations of videos and music in between the story. However, this game have a flaw that may or may not break it for the others. As a non Chinese speaking person, there're still a few untranslated lines in the game, and the translation sometime could feel a little bit awkward and inconsistent. Personally I don't mind, because I do understand the general theme of the story. I really like the dialogue between the two main characters, which are the ones I understand the most, the rest just flew over my head. I still recommend it though, for a very interesting experience.

一个从一开始就注定是be的故事，流程挺短的(加上我实在是听不下配音，纯看文本只有半小时)，结局结束得有点仓促，其他地方太多意识流导致我没怎么看懂...剧情文笔要不还是再努努力吧；而且错别字这块...你们校对真的有在好好干活吗? 转场挺有意思但次数也太多了每次都被硬控两下，适当减少些吧..配音方面虽然看cv都挺眼熟的但这作听起来棒读味也太重了；角色立绘cg我实在是太想吐槽了，开头欢音躺沙发上的cg和她的超绝紧身白衬衫感觉像是某些黄油本子里会出现的，不要画得这么恶俗可以吗??还有女同谈彩礼什么的是谁想出来的词..?就算去掉这一段对整体也无关紧要吧? 吃刀子太难受了，但制作组这个水平比起刀子更令我难受，玩了你们几部作品真的很想说你们文案要不换个人吧

big thanks to Capuno from off-topic for gifting me this VN, Very good story about love and death, relaxing soundtrack with cute character designs and a nice mix of live action videos thrown in such as driving for driving parts/dialogue, I thought it really added it the scenes. only issue whilst minor is the occasional bit of Chinese text at parts when there should be English, I read this in English text. I also had a random crash, probably because I read this on the steam deck but it seemed fine after booting up the game again. But aside from that, a good read if you've an hour to spare [spoiler] For a grieving person, everything is normal. [/spoiler]

百合小甜饼的反义词是什么，百合小洋葱？百合小催泪弹？

I have mixed feelings about this product. I enjoyed the story and its premise quite a lot- a woman coming to terms with her partner’s inevitable death and having to confront it as it happens. I enjoyed the two main girls and their voice acting, I found the art style to be rather pretty and enjoyed the symbolic flower transitions. I also enjoyed the story switching in time between transitions, and the music was pleasant all though nothing to write home about. But the translation is unfortunately, pretty bad. While I didn’t have too many instances where I didn’t know what was supposed to be said, I consistently had to reread things to figure out what exactly was wrong with the sentence. The tense was off, sometimes names were spelled incorrectly, and occasionally sentence structure just did not make much sense. There were also issues of the original Chinese text displaying, but at the very least it would followup with the english text. However, there was a scene with absolutely no english translation, meaning I had no choice but to open google translate on my phone and try and keep up. Along with that, it also seems like some things were not coded right. At various points of the story, the name of who’s speaking would just no longer be present, meaning you had to try and figure out who was talking with an already poor translation. It ended up being a struggle to read and took longer than it probably should have to get through it. But there were enough high points to this where I do feel guilty not recommending it. I did really enjoy it, but the english translation definitely did not do it justice- despite it still showing great potential. I definitely cannot recommend the english translation.

[h1] 明明是早已注定的告别，却没有好好向你说一句“再见” [/h1] 看到开头第一反应想到了三秋缒的小说《义忆》，所以其实我期望很高 但很可惜的是，我认为本部作品没有真的发挥出“筑梦”这项技术能带来的爆点，所能带来的表现力，能带给玩家的感动。实际上把筑梦换成其它的任何技术似乎也可以完成整个故事 非常短的流程让我以为要到高潮的时候就中断了，当然可以说是想留白，但我认为只要把梦境做出来再见一面欢音，配上音乐，在虚拟的梦境做一次虚假却也是真正的再见，才能引爆玩家刚刚积累起来的情感