在一切晴朗的日子里｜On all clear days

即使考虑到价格也过于短小了。 故事有些没头没尾的，多轮回有细节的差别但更多的是无意义的重复。虽然尝试用穿插回忆的方式丰满人物形象，但依旧不够充足。同时，主角的形象也显得过于懦弱，缺少成长。 最后的结尾也很仓促，看似首尾呼应，还留有遐想余地，但其实很偷懒地放弃了回收伏笔。如果接着展开第二阶段剧情的话还有很大的潜力，可惜没有。 CG收集更是只有3张，其中两张还是同一场景的差分。 就当是买了本杂志看了篇超短篇小说了。

退款就算了，毕竟第一次看到普通国gal好评率低成这样的，但差评还是要说两句 1、光顾着写设定，甚至用大量的笔墨铺垫世界观，把台词给路人介绍设定，还有不少讲道理的台词，顾着写设定而故事性极差 2、情节一坨，男主两个童年小故事就对姐姐进行一个“白给”的爱了，毫无代入感也理解不了男主 3、伏笔没有回收，两个周目里都提到男主起床晚了，但没解释原因 4、故事好像是轮回系，但并没有轮回后拯救姐姐的戏码，反而是出梦后进行一个更大的轮回。我猜测是故事压根没写完导致的，半成品行为，所以游戏短到我快进了三四周目都没过退款时间 5、♥♥♥♥

自认为抗性还可以，只能说还是挡不住这逆天剧情，莫名其妙就结局了姐姐就被炸死了？！WDF可以轮回然后又死一次？真的太抽象了，国产就不退款了，但是真不推荐玩！

[quote][url=https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/AI_slop][b]Warning: AI Slop[/b][/url] The visuals in this e-book are made with talentless, soulless AI generated content.[/quote] 在一切晴朗的日子里｜On all clear days is not a game, it's an e-book slapped together with the godawfully bad Webgal Visual Novel/E-Book construction kit. No professional writing took place here, and no professional game development took place either - it's just a product of filling out templates in the construction kit. Tagged as a dating sim, this e-book is as creepy and cringey as you could imagine. Like almost all e-book garbage on Steam, this is a nauseatingly cringey disaster about the author and his imaginary anime girlfriend. But it gets so much worse with this one, because the author relates his fantasy of dating his own sister. Noah, get the boat. Now, don't worry too much because the author has apparently got the attention span of a 5 year old with ADHD so "something" happens before he can have any luck with his imaginary anime girlfriend/sister, but the cringe of it all remains. Visual novels/e-books are the worst way to try read a book (and they're always written far worse than real books too). Imagine reading your favorite book, be that War and Peace or The Davinci Code (are you ok??), but you have to click the mouse for every single sentence that appears. You'd hate it. It's a garbage way to try read a book... and even if it wasn't, this still isn't a game. Now take that annoying clicking and add utterly cringey high-school anime club dropout writing to it (who else could write an ebook about the author dating his sister). Real authors are published in print and found in Barnes & Noble. This garbage only ended up on Steam because they paid $100 to self-publish, because let's face it, professional publishers would not only reject this garbage they saw it, they'd take out restraining orders. As mentioned, this features really godawful, "wrong" looking AI slop instead of genuinely and sincerely created game assets. It's hard to say if this was because the developer didn't have the skill to do the job of creating real game assets or couldn't afford to hire someone who does, but it also doesn't matter. What matters is that this looks bad because of that decision. AI slop sticks out like a sore thumb... and it comes across as insulting. There's also the old adage that those who lack the budget and talent to make their own game assets usually lack the budget and talent to do the rest of the job of game development properly, too, and that's glaringly obvious here. Those technical flaws drag this E-Book well below the minimum quality standards expected of a modern PC game. Let's talk about price and the value this represents for us gamers. Should you buy this E-Book? Is it among the best the Steam catalogue has to offer? 在一切晴朗的日子里｜On all clear days is relatively cheap at $2 USD, but it's not worth it. This is also competing with over 14,000 free games available on Steam, many of them far better than this paid product. Yeah, this guy wants to charge you $2 to read about how he wants to date his sister. Puke. There's enough defects and quality problems with this E-Book that it's really impossible to recommend to gamers. The use of AI slop is a direct insult to gamers and real, ethical content creators and artists everywhere. AI models are trained on copyrighted intellectual property without permission from the owners. Using AI slop in a published product should be seen as supporting these copyright violations. [quote][b][url=https://partner.steamgames.com/doc/marketing/profile]Profile Features Limited![/url][/b] Valve have marked this E-Book as "Profile Features Limited" at the time of this review. This is usually caused by poor sales figures and low community acceptance for the E-Book (to date). Until this status changes, this E-Book will not give you +1 to your Game Collector badge count, appear in profile achievements or any other Steam meta-accomplishments, nor can it be displayed in some profile showcases. If these factors are important to you, it may be worth holding off before buying this E-Book.[/quote]

一部使用WebGAL制作的短篇视觉小说，讲述了某次世界大战之后生活在战后重建代表城市的包工头“我”(身为主角名字都不给一个，太过分啦)发现战前老家旁的公园重建完成了，于是约上姐姐一起去重温，没想到正当我鼓起勇气时变故陡然发生，还好“我”有“金手指”直接开二周目，然而世界线的收束真的能轻易颠覆吗？ 游戏依托于引擎系统和UI各方面也都还行，常用功能基本都实现了 立绘背景之类的都中规中矩吧(可能有人也看出来了，部分背景图其实是取自真实场景改的) 剧本嘛，还是很有上升空间的，加油努力，奔跑吧，制作人（ 话说刚启动就蚌埠住了，这图标也太熟悉了吧，这年头用WebGAL引擎做的国产视觉小说还是挺难得的，毕竟基本都跑去更成熟自定义能力更强的ren'py那里了 不过其实这图标是可以改的来着，既然是依托于 Electron ，你就可以在它创建窗口的时候就指定它的图标，说具体一点就是改一下 main.js 脚本里的新窗口配置，加个 icon: path.join(__dirname,'./public/icons/game_icon.ico')，后面跟的图标的相对路径可以自定义，然后在开头加个 const path = require('path'); 把 Node.js 的 path 模块导入进去就行了，当然该作app目录打包压缩了还得先 extract 一下改完了还得在pack回去就是了 (提一嘴既然是“Web”GAL，那么它就会集成一些“Web”方面的东西，比如你按下 Ctrl+F12 就会发生一些有趣的事情) 同类型引擎上架 steam 据我所知还有免费的 Elf of Era! Idols Project、Agnostic Requiem，付费的 Safe House、青恋，魔改引擎的 倒计66日 等，可惜除了粉丝向的作品其他的基本都是门可罗雀，大家有条件的也可以去支持一下，国产引擎的发展还是不容易 总的来说，本作内容量稍显不足，不过看在价格的份上姑且暂时原谅你，但是剧本就明显还需要再优化一下，特别是这二周目，最好是能多做出一些改变多添加一些内容，希望后续能够像连着几天修BUG一样多更新点游戏内容吧 [quote]关注&加入[url=https://store.steampowered.com/curator/44819229]『街角的咖啡屋』[/url]，一起来探索各种趣味游戏[/quote]

一直以为是bug好多，八十多分钟还没走出第二目剧情。原来是剧情太短了，感觉和白开水一样。第一次想退款这种游戏，要剧情没剧情，感觉没意思，全员be，轮回也是be，唯一一个好处是有配音，要么加点免费dlc，这种剧情也不值37卢布。

一款悬念丛生、含苞待放的视觉小说，显然不足以给予玩家好的体验，但也不至于带来精神或物质上的损失 游戏的主要优点如下： 1、游戏的UI界面清新简洁、文本清晰，阅读体验良好 2、同价位上中规中矩的立绘和CG，不会让你的视觉神经中枢受到冲击 3、尽管条件有限，但仍对全部剧情做了配音 4、你可以游刃有余地体验所有内容并退款 游戏的主要问题如下： 1、不是一部完整的作品，没有回收伏笔，剧情嘎然而止 2、文本撰写有较大提升空间，应当再对一些词句进行推敲 3、故事逻辑过于跳脱，甚至可以说故事二字的占比不高，有学术研究报告之风 4、引导与功能设计较差，加以轮回的剧情，令玩家有些无所适从 总而言之，这是一部食之无味弃之快哉的游戏，如果你只是出于无聊，想打发个把钟头的时间，那么可以尝试。毕竟这不会对你造成经济损失，因为你的退款申请将毫无悬念的被批准，这也是我给出好评的唯一理由。

玩了这么多国g第一次给国g写差评，本作的美术配音和程序在国都是上乘水平，但是这个狗操的剧情真的给我把拳头看硬了。一个完整的故事应该有起因经过结果，这游戏只有经过，所谓的世界大战因何而起，到最后故事如何收场，完全没有交代，给我阅读下来的体验就是掐头去尾的一篇生活流水账。并不是说galgame写流水账不好，但还是和之间说的毛病一样，掐头去尾给人感觉割裂，让我不知道主角对亲生姐姐的感情起于何处，看来这种感情没有具体的展开描写，似乎凭空出现，并且这最多只能算是依赖而不是爱。最后就是这狗操的结尾了，但凡给个正常的结尾，两个人就算没过上没羞没臊的生活起码也得有个合理的归宿吧，这结尾姐姐不明不白的被炸死没有让我感到震撼惋惜，我只感到了红温，我能接受生离死别但不接受这种和出门被泥头车创死的逆天刀人剧情，刀完了还提示好像有二周目，我反反复复试了七八次才发现一个选项都没有，这游戏就是一个线性的流水账，姐姐就是必死无疑。。。。到这里我已经无语了，我支持国g这么久让我玩到捶胸顿足感到恶心与制作人对玩家满满恶意的还是第一个。

是我玩错了吗？怎么没玩多长时间就结束了？一共就三个轮回吗？ 价格便宜，剧情少，结局差，声音还可以，游戏里面有不显示字幕等bug,有点半成品，但是花点小钱玩玩到是还行。

好玩