Hauling Away

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A quaint romantic sci-fi tale with it's own unique twist. As a rather short read, story lacks any great scope or depth. Though characters were given just enough substance to care up to their final conclusion... Simple but satisfying. Yet from this point onward I'll have to raise an eyebrow should I see any attractive woman show me a seemingly earnest smile. No typos or grammar issues that stood out. Art/music is limited but nice. And props to the artist for making an attractive waifu without oversexualizing. [strike]Minor critique though is music doesn't always loop correctly, can end up with 'dead space' middle of a scene. [spoiler]This bug may be related to it's replayability. ;-) [/spoiler] And game itself is rather unoptimized at almost 800MB. A Ren'Py VN with this amount of content I would expect it to be 1/4 - 1/3 that size. So just a bit lacking for polish in the coding dept. [/strike] **UPDATE** These criticisms have been resolved as of the 1.2 update released just hours after this initial review. Kudos to the dev on the prompt follow-up.

45 minutes? then see my 22 minutes as a speed run! right, so: the game is very well done. the story is interesting, the experience isn't terrible, the art is well done, and overall worth your time. however: as advertised, this is a *very* short kinetic novel. the writing itself to me seemed a little shallow, and there wasnt much detail given on...what our MC went through. although: I suspect that was the idea, as not knowing everything adds a little to the experience. I hope Medice will keep up the great work. looking forward to more VNs in the future, even short ones like this. ..sequel?

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ちょっと切なくビターなSF短編。 一本道のビジュアルノベルなので、 だいたい15分～20分ほどで読み終わる。 元は英語版だけど、 日本語訳がしっかりしてるので読みやすい。 サムネのキャラに属性をくすぐられたのなら、 黙って読むべし。 なお読み終わってからタイトルを翻訳して意味に納得。

It was... an experience. It has a good frame, by no means can short VNs not hit hard. One exceptional VN that hits hard in its 30 min time span (That's a mobile visual novel of all damn things) is called Carpe Diem. However, just because short VNs can hit hard doesn't mean that these visual novels are immune to being bad because good short VNs exist. Unfortunately, I think this one is an example of such. There was an amazing set up and a great ending, but the buildup just fell flat. Major plot points came way to quickly and the pacing was honestly going faster than a Sonic the Hedgehog 1 Green Hill Speedrun. I still like to reccommend this to others because like I said the beginning and world building was amazing. Some more information would have been appreciated that we do get later on in the story which is appreciated, but it was enough to get you into the world. Oh yeah good artwork I enjoy a scene. Go ahead play for yourself, in my opinion there could be more work to be done but I see this as like a good rough draft and if this was fleshed down a bit more into a slow burn then this VN would be a 10/10. I'm serious this VN would be much better as a slow burn instead of all of the major points coming at you. Hope to see more great works from Medice.

宇宙、人生、出会い、別れをテーマとした短編ビジュアルノベル。 物語は静かながら、確かな重みをもって進んでいく。 ラストシーン、その終わり方に何を感じるかは人それぞれだと思うが。 個人的には、『自分』と照らし合わせ、いろいろと考えることにつながった。 小粒ながら良作かと思う。