Best of Us

This piece of interactive fictions suffers badly from poor execution. That spark of interesting possibility is there but far too often the narration, dialogue and even scenes are just disjointed. The flow of reading is constantly being interrupted by these moments where you stop and recognize "Hey that moved way too fast" or "That doesn't make any sense, the characters were inside how did we get out on a roof?" I find it hard to enjoy a story when my immersion is being broken every few pages. I can't recommend Best of Us. Worse than being frustrating, I'm disappointed that time and care weren't taken in editing this together.

“Best of Us” was a bizarre mix between an interesting read and a story cut far too short. I read through it a few times and came across many interesting concepts and characters that could’ve been great to get to know, but it never amounted to much. (4/10) The story is over in a flash, and you never have time to get invested in the world, nor grow all that close to anyone. Certainly not close enough to consider anyone a love interest or even a friend. Not only that, but most of the powers or abilities never seemed to be used or checked at all, so amounted to little more than flavor text. In short, the game is not in any way a terrible read, but far more content would be needed to weave an enrapturing tale. Indeed, the excellent writing did a good job setting up the foundation of a great story, but instead of capturing my imagination and transporting me into a fantastical world brimming with superheroes and their adversaries, all I’m left with is a feeling of lost potential. (4/10)

Quite confusing. Ending is basically the same no matter what you do.