You, With Me - A Kinetic Novel

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Tags: Adventure - VN - Visual Novel Additional Tags: Delete Local Content & Remove from Library TLDR: Tyranno Builder VN maker version of "That Dragon Cancer" with uneven writing styles. By mid-story the tone changes direction drastically and becomes mostly just a feel good story about the power of love. Removed for declutter Was there translation or localization issues with this? The korean setting is kind of a hint and the writing has issues. Sounds like this was done collaboratively between one person whom uses very flowery language and someone else with much more looser grammar and shorter, to the point sentences. One person seemingly in charge of narrator and overall arcs while the other wrote dialogue with some cross contamination of each other's style as if they had corrected each other and added to each other's work. Very jarring. The story is mostly one about the inner dialogue of a protag as he goes through medical stuff. Relationship with wife. Aside from a few more intense emotional moments it is mostly mundane and has a little bit of a soap opera feel to it. The sequence of events the story takes and how protag handles it is decently thought out but it is a delicate topic and some moments feel more genuine than others. You get strictly no interactivity and the game is pretty bland and low budget, with scenes involving characters that are not represented (med staff) or scenes of the character lying in bed showing him just standing up with the blank default anime pose wearing a hospital garb for example. Audio is forgettable mostly with pure silence and the occasional rare short piano track. The flowery writer sometimes goes completely out of control when he contributes to dialogues, making several sentences get cut off by the dialog window size, it just overflows and there is no scrolling it. Some stoy arcs feel like they are repeating, or roles reverse, and then events repeat again, with ups and downs. It gets a little formulaeic after a while and you wish the game would just be more economical in how it presents the important parts to the player.

Ya sé que es una visual novel, pero la cantidad de texto es excesiva. En medio de un dialogo, te plantan hojas enteras de texto, lo cual le hace perder el ritmo completamente. Además, hay partes en los diálogos, que no se ve la línea inferior de lo que dice porque lo tapa la pantalla. Eso demuestra que ni siquiera han testeado el juego. Decepcionante.

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