SerendipityMorningMist: Dawn, Tobacco, Your Scent

「寂しくないふりしてた まあ、そんなのお互い様か 誰かを求めることは 即ち傷つくことだった Oh, can you give me one last kiss？ 燃えるようなキスをしよう 忘れたくても 忘れられないほど」 One Last Kiss 宇多田ヒカル プレイした感想は、まず他のプレイヤー様が言われる通り、主人公である千紗と彼のつながりとこれから二人が「歩みたくなくても歩まなければいけない」道をゲーム概要を読み込んで理解しておかないと、ただヤリまくってるカップルの日記帳やね。と勘違いされかねないので… では本題に入りますと、今作、セーブロードが実装されておりません。これはかなり不安でしたし、ちょっと休憩、しようと思った時にやめられないやん！と、まだゲームの全体像がわからないからシオリ代わりにセーブ、あるいはとりあえずセーブ、セーブ…ということが出来なかったので、最初は「なんて不親切なメーカーだ！」と思いましたし、物語がけっこうゆっくり読んだつもりでもプレイ時間1時間を切る短編であってもセーブロードは欲しかったですね。 あと、細かいところになっちゃうんですが、彼の部屋の中に二人の写真が飾られてるんですよね。このアイテムを使って「二人の楽しかった過去」を振り返るシーンがあってもよかったのかな？とも思ったんですが、やっぱり無粋ですかね。「別れゆく二人が過去を振り返ってもただ痛みを増すだけで何の慰めにもならない」だけと、思いました。 また寂しいなぁ、と思ったのが二人のつながりを確認するのがただセッ〇スというのもちょっと違うんじゃないか？人はそこまで獣ではないよ？と。 もう少し何か煮詰めればもっといいゲームになったのかな？という気はしました。 でも主人公・千紗はかなり魅力的ですね。ボクはかなりどストライクだったので、彼女が切ない顔をするたびにこちらの胸も苦しくなりました。 うーん…なんとかならんかったんかなぁ。 話からそれますが、こういう魅力的な「お姉さん」とのまぐわいが個人的にしっくりきますね。ありえないカップの胸を装備したり、処女なのにやたら感じまくる少女（？）より全然ありです。 だけど…赤評価かなぁ。すみません。

One of the VN game that left me feeling somber after finishing it. Despite being eroge and having almost to no story or explanation, the game length is only about 20mins-ish, despite a questionable??? ending [spoiler] The ending does not quite makesense??? explanations below[/spoiler] still make my eyes watery at the end. The story and character personality is well written than triple-A games these days. High key this would sell more if it wasn't eroge game and had a longer story :wilted-flower: But reading through her letter(In game folders) makes me frustrated at the MC's passiveness [spoiler] like… YO your girl bouta leaving. Ain't you gonna be more assertive??? [/spoiler] --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [h1] Spoiler - my story analysis(according to my pea brain understanding.)[/h1] [b][b]*RECOMMEND TO FINISH THE GAME BEFORE READING THIS.*[/b][/b] The story is great, but the unexplained parts and execution of the story kinda make me ??? at the end. I replay this a few times to try to understand it. [h3] The Story: [/h3] Like she's passionate artist but running out of inspiration, so she's decided to go study abroad? I mean, yeah, kinda see that but like they phased it like she'll cut all communication and go into exile, which doesn't quite makesense, unless she's acquired another country's residency or got relatives living out there, she's probably gonna comeback to Japan anyway right? unless something something lore unexplained/ [h3] MC passiveness toward Chisa: [/h3] [b] [i] "...What's wrong... Planning to be this gentle, even on our last night?" [/i] [/b] The passivity of the mc makes me quite frustrated, probably due to the unexplained on what and why (explained in the letter), but still it doesn't explain the overly passive nature of MC. If I were him, I'd do everything and anything to make her stay or go with her, but this guy doesn't seem to try anything, awaiting the day (more explaining below) [b]'But that doesn't respect her wish'[/b] like yeah that's true, but she's also displaying that she's willing to change her mind. [b][i]MC: "One can always start quitting again tomorrow." gain balls Chisa: "Hehe, true enough." acknowledged[/i][/b] and you know what this guy do next??? [b][i]"On the dimly lit balcony, Chisa and I stood side by side, [b]without another word[/b], smoking quietly as the sky shifted from dark to pale. "[/i][/b] What... like [b]BROO WHY ARE YOU SOLD????[/b]:wilted_flower: you literally got the hoop right Infront of you, and you not throwing???? I will not be surprised if she actually didn't comeback because she's married the guy overseas. She is practically begging him to give her a reason to stay, and then this guy does ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ absolutely nothing with it. Bro is terrified of rocking the boat that he watches the ship sink. :broken_heart: [b]*Just having her here with me was more than enough.*[/b] He keeps choosing the warmth of the present moment rather than bringing up the [b]'conversation'[/b]. poor girl. :sob: [b][i]"...What's wrong... Planning to be this gentle, even on our last night?"[/i][/b] she keeps hinting it and this guy keep missing it. It's look like he doesn't even actively find a way to dispute her or find a way to include him in her plan, but maybe that's the point? Passiveness without fighting back will eventually make you slowly lose everything. *this guy could learn a thing or two from the bubble pop electric guy* [b] BUT [/b] He did gain a balls on the LAST ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ DAY but she shushed him and he ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ CUCK HIMSELF. :broken_heart: [b][i]"...It's already been decided, hasn't it? For our last night, let's just... spend it quietly."[/i][/b] she's probably took all his silent as his answer and reiterate it back to him, imo. [b]LIKE WHAT????[/b] BRO acts like a bystander in his own life. if it were me, I'd still try to talk her out of it or find solutions together, like go with her and find work there to help support her. They've gone through alot together before(from the background pics), this probably won't be that large of a setback?? [h3] Chisa's Self -[strike]protection[/strike] destruction tendency : [/h3] [i]"She is afraid of the future—afraid she cannot give you the promises you deserve—so she chooses to cut things off before being hurt you. Every serious conversation between you ends in physical closeness; it is both her way of loving you and her way of escaping."[/i] -[Character Profile] This does prove that she's doesn't even give him autonomy or considered his opinions in her ideas at all, that's the flaws of her personality, and her insecurity plus with the passiveness of MC, leading to all of this, she's pushing away him away and he doesn't even trying to pull the rope or getting on board. [i][b]"Every serious conversation between you ends in physical closeness; it is both her way of loving you and her way of escaping." [/b] [/i] notice how every interactions end with ***? Every time emotional weight builds, it's literally her particular form of avoidance, her self-defense mechanism flaring up to avoid a deeptalk. Their flaws fit together so neatly that neither ever forced the conversation that might have saved them, both overlap each other enough to cover each other's holes. [b]'maybe because of her feelings for MC, she's starting to lose her passion for art.'[/b] Gng... if she truly love him, she'll find a way to include him in her passion... but it looks like she doesn't even consider him in her equation. That's a self-harming tendency. If her love for MC is true, then the hurt from parting will overwhelm the sense of whatever she's trying to find, that's why people still linger over old things. (ts get too personal.) It's wild but in an ideal mirror world where they actually talk it out, i believe they'll eventually find an agreement that doesn't involve departure since all of this happening from unassertiveness and unfulfilled holes in the relationship. *Through Patches of Violet start playing* [h3]Overall:[/h3] Despite being so short, like 20mins-ish, it managed to make me feel and shed tears a little. The letter being found in the game files actually makes you feel like you ravage through the old stuff and found her note. Chisa and MC's personalities feel quite real, especially her flaws. She did give him a very long time for him to convince her, but his unassertiveness is the cement to their relationship, he did nothing til the last day, when she had enough time to consolidate her heart. (MC might be gilgamesh fr with this much sold) Her personality is actually quite like me and am also doing art. But if I were her, I probably wouldn't preemptively nukes the relationship over passion like that, especially when MC is literally the ideal partner to have highkey, like this guy literally a dog, and he fully respects your opinions. you usually won't find a guy/girl like that ever in your life. But despite all of that, the story a bit flawed imo. The ending feels too rushed??? if the point is to feel the urgency of Chisa's departure, then They did it really well, but it's cut too short to actually feel attached. If they floored it a bit more, add a little story at the start where she told him about her will to study abroad, etc. I believe this might actually make me cry a river. (but ts already hit me like a slow-mo car crash) This game give me so much thought for a game only 3buckaroos Right now, since it's a finished ErogeVN game and second game from this studio(seeing from steam store page at first, i thought this game was caramel column new game lwk their art style pretty similar?), i can only pray that they will make a pre/sequel elaborating on their relationship. I spent hours replaying this game and on this review, am bouta Distort. *insert all in his mind gif.* Thank you for reading my schizo over analyze larp thus far.

作者咱给个好结局吧，哪怕女主两三年后学成归来也行啊。

暂且不论剧情，男主那个灰色僵尸模型谁能蚌得住。游戏剧情也是一坨，要分手了打分手炮连打5天，剧情型到底在哪，没玩过gal的可以吃屎试试

小短拔，氛围营造得很好，情感细腻 （男主肤色像僵尸一样有点吓人）

10/10 - Don't forget to check the game folder after you completed this game.

能不能出个后续和男主有个好结果啊QAQ 太感性的我看不得这些QAQ

As a serious review. Words cannot describe what love is to many and nor can I. In the brief 30 minutes of this short story of a game it presents a lot in this tiny world without many words needing to be said as subtle changes in the background happens. It does present a lot with the show and not tell a massive weakness that plagues today's writing as too many tends to tell what happens instead of show. I feel like even though I don't know or understand the concept of love means but seen the bastardization of sex this felt more of a genuine connection to love and relationships in a pure form instead of the current day bastardization of it. Thanks for teaching me how it feels to love again in this cruel cold world.

WHEN YAHH, AKU JUGA PENGEN. PEAK GAME BTW!

可惜太短，男主像僵尸