Brother Perro

I don't know if it was just my computer but I had some troubles with the game. The first half of the game was fine, but then it got to the shovel scene and everyhting went down hill. First it froze and stopped working, I reloaded it, managed to get past that sccne, but then it seemed to skip a big chunk of the game and went straight to the end. What I saw of the storyline wasn't that bad though, so if you want to play go ahead, hopefully you will have better luck than I did.

Жена сказала, что если на этом обзоре наберётся 10 лайков и 5 наград, то она подарит ящик пива. Мужики, выручайте!

O jogo tem um bom ritmo para contar a história, só não olhe nos olhos do ''cachorro''. 8/10

its a pretty cool story line, but it froze [spoiler] after the crash when i went to pick up the shovel [/spoiler] and i was stuck with a black screen and the sound of rain

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Extrañamente me gustó, es una historia líneal en la que la única interacción es click o enter para avanzar. Aunque tiene varios fallos puedo decir que de cierta forma me enganchó hasta el final. De todas maneras es gratis, si no te gusta no pasa nada.

Hence I stopped by the bug of completely black scene after testing with multi possible buttons. Judging from speculation, I assume the whole story is trying to merge more than one issues worthy of concerns in reality into the visual novel form. This merits my vigilance that to refine is vital while combining multi elements during game-making. During the experience, it upsets me that nothing to interact with except for clicking Enter(If I mess with this part, let me know plz). As a reader from the other hand, my reading process is still fragmented, despite that those interludes somehow helps recovering. Even if this work is aimed to be painters' talent show or portfolio, there remains some space for improvements, thought. Besides some characters' ratios(e.g. The girl dressed in purple), some scenes/compositions are redundant. (e.g. The rearview mirror) Sorry that I may not thumbs up to this, but I do appreciate your kindness of free release, after all. Hopefully the code problem would be solved.