Unquiet Grey

I'm glad there's only positive reviews so far because while it's very mid, it doesn't deserve a big red "negative" either. That being said. It's flat. The writing is poor (very tell don't show, every conversation and every moment is summarized rather than lived, and not even very poetically - often it's basically "You take the phone. You look at it. It makes you sad.") and repetitive (I don't mean the story, that's a feature not a bug, but I don't need to hear about his perfume every time). I didn't feel anything at any point, and by the end I was just bored. Oddly enough the only thing it succeeded at was making everything look bleak ([i]not[/i] sad), so the "end the cycle and be happy" ending is not believable at all... Also, the fade-out fade-in transitions are so slow, it forces a slow pace which is SO annoying. I don't want my choices to be "every other line takes 5 seconds to appear" and "every other line takes 5 clicks to appear at a decent speed". It's a cheap trick and it doesn't even work. (I did like how the ending of the first life looped into the first loop though. It was only two lines, but I liked them) So yeah. Not horrible, but not interesting. The narrator checks out decades before the main character.

wow... i am so heartbroken.

Excellent story. Beautiful graphics. Very nice music. The credit song was haunting. A very touching game. Shed more than one tear. I recommend it, but prepare tissues.

Not really a game. More like an experience. But a very beautiful one. Almost made me cry. I'm a person who really struggles to let go, so it was a bit of a bruise for me. I'd say it's worth experiencing, especially considering the grand price of 0. Beautiful art.

10/10 would suffer again (I realize the irony in this)

[i]"’T is I, my love, sits on your grave, And will not let you sleep; For I crave one kiss of your clay-cold lips, And that is all I seek.” “You crave one kiss of my clay-cold lips, But my breath smells earthy strong; If you have one kiss of my clay-cold lips, Your time will not be long."[/i] An innovative take on an old poem. However, the achievements give away the core setting (time loop), and the story is somewhat plain and predictable.

[h1] 免费但别在上班摸鱼时玩，泪崩了没人递纸♥ [/h1] 路边醒来，头痛欲裂，身边一件陌生外套，兜里证件照上的男人不认识。打开手机，锁屏是“你”和他的合照。你是谁？他是谁？那个笑着依偎在他身边的“你”又是谁？带着满脑子问号踏进这个时间循环，答案非但没变清晰，反而越来越疼。 一小时左右、一万一千字的剧本，讲述的是一段注定无法挽回的爱情。你只能眼睁睁看着一切发生，那种无力感像钝刀子割肉。后期听到他弹吉他的时候很难忍住不落泪——他已经融入女主的生命里，几乎是血肉的一部分，让她走出来等于带走一半灵魂，留下的只是空壳。 好在美术和音乐足够温柔。手绘插图细腻有温度，原声带里交织着柔和的吉他与独立摇滚，像是在伤口上轻轻盖了条毯子。免费入库，适合一个人安静地花一个小时读完。别被“时间循环”骗了，这不是爽文，是扎扎实实的催泪弹。 [h1] 臣植言：臣闻士之生世，入则事父，出则事君；事父尚于荣亲，事君贵于兴国。 -- 求自试表 曹植♥ [/h1]