Lost in the Woods

great art and imagery Violet's character design is the perfect match of cute but giving off a feeling of uneasiness. but the writing goes into “tell and show as well”. Your game spoon feeds the player the story and info. Ex for info: Violet sees there are pages missing in a book, a simple way to show this is the last pages are ripped out. maybe she says "oh the last pages are torn" we don't need her explaining that she will find it later, it’s redundant. Ex for story: Violet goes to the shed and explains that there's not a single good memory there. You can keep it at that that makes a thought in the players head of why? And gets explained in the husband's journal later. As well as violet explaining what's in the shed, why? If info needs to be shown that the tools are gone. make it another place to walk in like the house. and show there are obvious imprints where the tools were now missing.as well making the shed look torn up or blood at the door where she maybe could have pounded for hours, when violet was locked in there. Finding the tools later, now answers the question of where they were. And now the interior tells the story of what happened, without walls of unnecessary text. But the exposition in the husband's journal is fine since it a journal where thoughts are written down where the lingering questions of what happened with violent gets answered violet over-explaining everything makes the themes you're trying to portray feel off because of that. The story has great potential to be truly horrifying. At the moment sadly your writing is holding you back Delulu girl, keep working on your writing. I will try out your next game (the doll museum). I hope to see your improvement as a writer. but I do love horrific imagery and this fills my needs for horror.

Short & Sweet, though be careful of interacting with an item for a second time, if that triggers a cutscene, there will be no way to skip it, at least you can skip the dialogues. The story is intriguing but the game is so short that there's no time to digest it, or theorize about it as you progress, but at least the endings are straight to the point. The best part about it is definitely the art, it can be quite disturbing at times, especially at the end of each route, give it a try if you're into disturbing imagery and stuff like that

Ta bien, es corto y me gusto el arte.

Very cool, very quirky

7.3 / 10 I wouldn't say it's a "must-play," but it's not offensively bad at all. The imagery is pretty nice, and what the game is *trying* to portray was somewhat intriguing. The voice acting is somewhat cringy at points, sure, but the direction wasn't terrible. Very short, simple game. And for free, it's worth a look.

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