AftLife -Girl and Cats, and Lost world-

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Things I liked: S tier art on girl, genuine artistic merit, nice combo of watercolour on pencil with light 'hatching' (cross-hatching when the lines don't cross). 99% sure it's done using software, 80% sure it's done in ClipStudio Paint, and it looks great! She has different facial expressions, and I actually like that she isn't heavily animated. Distortion animation usually sucks ass, so I'm glad they didn't try. Seiso: I like that the game is 'seiso' (cute/wholesome). ... ooor it would be if that cat didn't keep saying '♥♥♥♥' and '♥♥♥♥♥♥♥'. lol. Things I didn't like: Inconsistent art style & quality: Art style of the cat does not at all match the art style of the girl in the banner and screen shots, and the cat looks ♥♥♥♥ by comparison. Art quality generally VERY bad lol. Art on girl character is next level good. Bad Engrish: Literally says 'brack & white' instead of 'black & white'. OK I'll admit, that's adorable, but a better quality translation would be nice. Foul language: Probably due to translator failing to grasp certain subtleties of the English language. The use of '♥♥♥♥' and '♥♥♥♥♥♥♥' by the cat, while consistent with it's personality, is out of place in an aggressively 'seiso' (cute/wholesome) game, that would otherwise be appropriate for children. It's free: That which is given has no value. On the one hand, it does give the dev a chance to get some much needed feedback, so mebbe they are just being smart. Personally, I think I would rather just finish a product (Oh god how I wish I could actually finish something for once), charge money for it, then everybody can tell me it sucks, and they will be honest because it actually cost them money, and then I can fix it, and then I can make a better product from the start next time. Rinse and repeat. What I would copy: I like that there are no mini-games, it's just a straight up visual novel, and given that mini-games in VN's are always generic stuff we have all played before, at this point I just want a VN to be a VN, no bells and whistles, basically just a text heavy digital manga with really nice artwork. Do want. Like the seiso aspect. LOVE the art style on the girl. What I would improve on / do differently: Keep art style and quality consistent: Bad art looks even worse when you put it next to a shining beacon of artistic merit. Why do you think they put modern art in a separate gallery? Wouldn't give it away for free, half finished: That which is given has no value. Finish it. Charge for it. The English would be better, but its easy for me to say that because I'm OG. You can look forward to enjoying the google-translated Japanese version of my VN. Desu.

日语英语翻译都有问题，看着会有点难受。 只有三章，有很多伏笔，例如不能出门和会说话的猫。

[spoiler] [h1] Cat, with a painful translation [/h1] [/spoiler]

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